homework#15
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Hi, Joylin! Today is saturday! I spoke you that I don\'t have any schdule but I will meet my friends to drink beer. It would be good time for me. Anyway, I also have one question about English! It is about the preposition. The sentence is \"I know all the dances to high school musical.\" In that case, Does the sentense \"I know all the dances about high school musical.\" have a different meaning with that sentence? This is my question!
HW#15 How can you possibly mingle with a stranger who doesn\'t speak your language?
when I was sophomore, I met a guy who can\'t speak korean and was from Germany. But My hobbies was the same with me. So, we enjoyed playing soccer and we were to be a friends although we can\'t speak each languages.
In a nutty, the sports can make people mingle with someone who can\'t speak their language.
My opnion is that if you want to be a friend with other countries people, the sports can help your relationship.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jonathan!
Thanks for asking about prepositions.
Your first sentence is not in a correct grammar.
The second sentence is in its correct grammar.
Here are my corrections.
when I was sophomore, I met a guy who can\'t speak korean and was from Germany. But My hobbies was the same with me.
>> When I was sophomore, I met a guy who can\'t speak Korean and was from Germany. And my hobbies were still the same that time.
So, we enjoyed playing soccer and we were to be a friends although we can\'t speak each languages.
>>So, we enjoyed playing soccer and we became friends although we can\'t speak each other\'s languages.
In a nutty, the sports can make people mingle with someone who can\'t speak their language.
>>In a nut, the sports can make people mingle with someone who can\'t speak their language.
My opnion is that if you want to be a friend with other countries people, the sports can help your relationship.
>>My opinion is that if you want to be a friend with foreign people, sports can help build up your relationship.
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