Homework (15)
학생이 쓴 원문
- How do you think victims of racism or discrimination feel?
Then I want to kill that people who said that.
- How is the Internet changing our lives?
The Internet makes us live easier.
- Can you live without the Internet?
No. Because I have class or do my homework using the Internet.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! Thank you making your last homework this week!
Then I want to kill that people who said that.
>>Then, I want to kill that person who said that.
The Internet makes us live easier.
>>The internet makes us live easier.
No. Because I have class or do my homework using the Internet.
Until the next one!
See you in class on Monday! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
Then I want to kill that people who said that.
>>Then, I want to kill that person who said that.
The Internet makes us live easier.
>>The internet makes us live easier.
OR>>The internet makes our lives easier.
No. Because I have class or do my homework using the Internet.
>>No, because I have class or do my homework using the internet.
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