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2026-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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1)What is something unique you can experience in Jeju that you cannot find elsewhere? Answer :Wind Stones Wome( Female Free Divers) The Haenyeo are legendary. These women—many in their 60s–80s—free-dive without oxygen tanks to harvest seafood. 2)What season do you think is the best time to visit Jeju? Answer: All four seasons are beautiful, but summer is great for surfing or enjoying the sea, spring and autumn offer plenty to see with various kinds of flowers, and the snow on Hallasan Mountain is also worth seeing in winter.

강사 첨삭

Eun Gyo,

Thanks for sharing your thoughts about Jeju Island life.

- Ash

Wome( Female Free Divers)

>> Women (Female Free Divers)

The Haenyeo are legendary.

>> The Haenyeo are legendary.

These women—many in their 60s–80s—free-dive without oxygen tanks to harvest seafood.

>> These women—many in their 60s and 80s—free-dive without oxygen tanks to harvest seafood.

All four seasons are beautiful, but summer is great for surfing or enjoying the sea, spring and autumn offer plenty to see with various kinds of flowers, and the snow on Hallasan Mountain is also worth seeing in winter.

>> All four seasons are beautiful, but summer is perfect for surfing or enjoying the sea; spring and autumn offer plenty to see with their various flowers, and the snow on Hallasan Mountain is also worth seeing in winter.

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