homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Which participant do you find most interesting in the TV show, I am [Name]? Why?
What qualities seem most important to the contestants when choosing a partner?
I think people with unique personalities are interesting. and I find handsome people interesting. Girls likes handsome boys.
They start to love in five nights 6days.
Women want to be love. so it is important mens hearts.. I feel.. It is important that appearance, job, money, age according to decide.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
See you!
- Ash
I think people with unique personalities are interesting.
>>CORRECT!
and I find handsome people interesting.
>> I find handsome people interesting.
Girls likes handsome boys.
>> CORRECT!
They start to love in five nights 6days.
>> They start dating in six days.
Women want to be love. so it is important mens hearts..
>> Women want to be love so that is the most important for them.
I feel.. It is important that appearance, job, money, age according to decide.
>> I feel like appearance, job, money, and age are the deciding factors.
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