homework
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What impact does yellow dust have on the environment and agriculture in Korea?
What measures does the Korean government take to warn people about yellow dust?
I don\'t know. but I know it is a impact all of people. people nose and neck are weakening..
I feel like too..
Korean government take measures vehicle exhaust emission limit.
but it is not important. The fundamental cause is China.
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[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
-Ash
I don\'t know.
>> CORRECT!
but I know it is a impact all of people.
>> However, I know that there is an impact to people.
people nose and neck are weakening..
>>People’s lungs are beco[이름]g weaker.
I feel like too..
>> I also feel the same.
Korean government take measures vehicle exhaust emission limit.
>> The Korean government is taking measures to limit vehicle exhaust emissions.
but it is not important. The fundamental cause is China.
>> However, this is not the most important factor because the fundamental cause lies in China.
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