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I want to see the drinking culture in companies disappear. We are often pressured to drink a lot of alcohol at company dinners or something like that. There are also too many drinking gatherings, and those should disappear too.
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Good afternoon, Ha [이름]!
In Korea, drinking has become part of the culture. In many situations and events, it is easy to get a bottle of soju and have a drink, whether to celebrate or to relieve stress. In the Philippines, however, there are stricter rules about where alcohol can be consumed. As a result, you may notice that not all restaurants serve alcohol, and only establishments with the proper permits are allowed to do so.
Aki~
I want to see the drinking culture in companies disappear.
>> CORRECT!
We are often pressured to drink a lot of alcohol at company dinners or something like that.
>> CORRECT!
There are also too many drinking gatherings, and those should disappear, too.
>> CORRECT!
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