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What would you change about your recent trip if you could?
If i can change something in my last trip, i will change little schedule. Because i didn\'t visit liquor store. So i couldn\'t buy some liquor. That is a bit of a waste. Another things are all fine. Last trip is really good trip for me.
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If i can change something in my last trip, i will change little schedule. Because i didn\'t visit liquor store.So i couldn\'t buy some liquor.
>> If I could change something about my last trip, I would change my schedule a little because I didn’t visit a liquor store, so I couldn’t buy any liquor.
That is a bit of a waste.
>> That was a bit of a waste.
Another things are all fine.
>> Other things were all fine.
>> Other things were all fine.
Last trip is really good trip for me.
>> My last trip was really good for me.
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