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2026-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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What are some ways governments can respond to an oil price crisis? How does an oil price crisis affect ordinary families? government reduce oil tax. so Government is delaying the increase oil price. but Oil company increase the price. so We cannot prevent oil price to reduce. All families using public transportation. me too.. Goverment recommand to using transportation. Odd/Even Vehicle Operation System is being implemented.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름], 

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-Teacher Ash


government reduce oil tax.

>> The government should reduce the oil tax.


 so Government is delaying the increase oil price. but Oil company increase the price.

>> The government is delaying the increase in oil prices, but oil companies are increasing the price. 


 so We cannot prevent oil price to reduce.

>> We cannot stop the oil price increase.


All families using public transportation. me too..

>> All families should use public transportation including me. 


 Goverment recommand to using transportation.

>> Our government recommends using public transportation.


 Odd/Even Vehicle Operation System is being implemented.

>> The odd-even vehicle operation system is also being implemented.


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