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2012-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) They are not going to pack the lunch basket. (not/to pack) 2) I am not going to ask somebody the way. (not/to ask) 3) Rita is not going to borrow Jim's book. (not/to borrow) 4) We are not going to design a T-shirt. (not/to design) 5) I'm not going to click on the red button. (not/to click) I prpared my trip schedule during this weekend. I have too much place that I want to go. It was not easy to set the course. The most difficult thing was a findging a Catholic church. Finding that it has a English mass was very difficult. Thailand is Buddhist country. It has a lot of wat but not a church. Finally I found it by searching on the internet. But the mass time is not good for me. The English mass time is 10 am in Sunday. I will try to go to a river market by a tour package that time. I'm thingking of that now.

강사 첨삭

  Hello Miss. [Name], Happy Monday.. Wow, your trip is about to come my dear and I hope you would enjoy that trip though you\'re gonna have it alone.. Talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..:) xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) They are not going to pack the lunch basket. (not/to pack)  >>correct2) I am not going to ask somebody the way. (not/to ask)  >>correct3) Rita is not going to borrow Jim\'s book. (not/to borrow)  >>correct4) We are not going to design a T-shirt. (not/to design)  >>correct5) I\'m not going to click on the red button. (not/to click) >>correctI prpared my trip schedule during this weekend.  >>correct  >>Trip schedule or itineraryI have too much place that I want to go.  >>correctIt was not easy to set the course.  >>correctThe most difficult thing was a findging a Catholic church.  >>The most difficult thing was to find a catholic Church.Finding that it has a English mass was very difficult. >>Finding a catholicmasswhich renders English language is very difficult to find. Thailand is Buddhist country.  >>correctIt has a lot of wat but not a church.  >>correctFinally I found it by searching on the internet.  >>correctBut the mass time is not good for me.  >>correctThe English mass time is 10 am in Sunday.  >>correctI will try to go to a river market by a tour package that time. >>correct I\'m thingking of that now.  >>I\'m thinking of that right now.    

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