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In the past, fierce competition among bidders led to unethical behavior. Since evaluators must assess the bidders\' submissions to select a winner, they hold substantial influence. Consequently, bidders sometimes offered them significant financial incentives.
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Good morning, Ho [이름]!
Fierce competition itself is normal in business. However, when that competition leads bidders to do things like bribery, collusion (secret agreements), bid rigging, or fraud, then it clearly becomes corruption. It happens globally. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. I appreciate how you expand your horizon to give a detailed answer.
Aki~
In the past, fierce competition among bidders led to unethical behavior
>> CORRECT!
OR: In the past, intense competition among bidders often led to unethical behavior
Since evaluators must assess the bidders\' submissions to select a winner, they hold substantial influence.
>> CORRECT!
Consequently, bidders sometimes offered them significant financial incentives.
>> CORRECT!
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