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학생이 쓴 원문
My company, HDEC is one of the oldest company in Korea, HDEC was established in 1947. HDEC is celebrating its 79th anniversary this year. Additionally, HDEC is the parent company of Hyundai Motor Group. For these reasons, I’m proud to work at HDEC.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ho [이름]!
Wow, I am thrilled that I am speaking to a person who is working in one of the oldest companies in Korea. I believe that the company has mastered the ins and outs of the business that made them stable for a long time. I wish and hope that your company will keep growing to influence the lives of many people and to provide more jobs and opportunities. fighting!
Aki~
My company, HDEC, is one of the oldest company in Korea, HDEC was established in 1947.
>> My company, HDEC, is one of the oldest companies in Korea. HDEC was established in 1947.
HDEC is celebrating its 79th anniversary this year.
>> CORRECT!
Additionally, HDEC is the parent company of Hyundai Motor Group.
>> CORRECT!
For these reasons, I’m proud to work at HDEC.
>> CORRECT!
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