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I think people can help us in small communities.
>> I think people in small communities help each other more than people in big cities.
because big cities is not friendship. they are busy in life. also they are competitive spirit.
>> Big cities are not built on friendship because everyone is too busy competing with each other.
so I don\'t want to live in Seoul.
>> I do not live in Seoul.
I live in the south part of metropolitan area.
>> I live in the Southern part of the metropolitan area.
if weak people, we need to help for someone.
>> If we see people who are struggling, we need to help them.
We should realize a just society.
>> We should keep in [이름]d that we live in a society.
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