Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Cathy!
It\'s been a while. I am comeback!
I\'ll start doing my homework again from today. The classes have definitely helped me a lot during that time. Thanks again!
If I planned a perfect day, I would spend the whole day shopping. Of course, I’d need to have a lot of money.
These days, I want to buy a lot of things. For example clothes, shoes, watches, and other things to improve my appearance.
And I’m going to get some skin care at a dermatology clinic. I haven’t taken care of myself very well for a while.
I think the day will pass quickly if I do all of that. Just thinking about it makes me feel good.
강사 첨삭
Hi Clark,
I know that lately you’ve been dealing with a lot of problems, and it can really feel exhausting and overwhelming. Even so, I truly appreciate that you’re still showing up and doing your best. That says a lot about your strength.
It’s not easy to keep going when you feel burned out, but the fact that you’re still here, still trying, and still moving forward means you’re stronger than you think. You don’t have to be perfect, you just have to keep going, one step at a time.
Give yourself some credit. You’re handling more than most people can see, and you’re still standing. Take things slowly, take care of yourself, and don’t forget that progress doesn’t have to be fast to be real.
You’re doing better than you think, Clark. Keep going.
~Teacher Cathy
It\'s been a while. I am comeback!
>>It\'s been a while. I am back!
I\'ll start doing my homework again from today. The classes have definitely helped me a lot during that time. Thanks again!
>>CORRECT
OR>>I’m going to start doing my homework again from today. Your classes have really helped me a lot. Thanks again!
If I planned a perfect day, I would spend the whole day shopping. Of course, I’d need to have a lot of money.
>>CORRECT
OR>>My ideal day would be spent shopping from morning to night, though I’d definitely need a big budget.
These days, I want to buy a lot of things. For example clothes, shoes, watches, and other things to improve my appearance.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Lately, I’ve been wanting to shop for a bunch of things, like clothes, shoes, watches, anything that helps me look more put-together.
And I’m going to get some skin care at a dermatology clinic. I haven’t taken care of myself very well for a while.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I’m also thinking of visiting a dermatology clinic for some skincare treatments since I haven’t been taking great care of myself recently.
I think the day will pass quickly if I do all of that. Just thinking about it makes me feel good.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I feel like the day would fly by if I did all of that. Even just imagining it already puts me in a good mood.
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