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Hello Cathy. I\'m sorry, I was able to attend our class, because I was very tired. I went to bed more than usually day. Who I admire... I admire my parents the most. I admired them when I was young, and I still do now. They are humble, honest, and caring, and I can describe them only with the best words in the world. When I see them getting older now, it always breaks my heart. I am always proud to be their son. I also want to be that kind of person to my children.

Hello Clark,

I really felt your sincerity in this message. The way you talked about your parents was simple but very powerful. Admiring them not only when you were young but even now says a lot about the kind of values they gave you. Humble, honest, caring, those are not small qualities.

I also understand what you said about seeing them get older. That feeling is heavy, but it also shows how much you love and respect them. And the fact that you want to become that kind of person for your children, that’s already the beginning of becoming it.

Your writing here is very natural and emotional in a quiet way. You don’t need complicated words to express something meaningful, and you did that well.

You’re doing well, Clark. Keep going, steadily, like this.

~Teacher Cathy

 

I\'m sorry, I was able to attend our class, because I was very tired. I went to bed more than usually day.

>>I\'m sorry, I wasn\'t able to attend our class because I was very tired. I went to bed earlier than usual.

Who I admire...

I admire my parents the most. I admired them when I was young, and I still do now.

>>CORRECT

OR>> My parents have always been the people I admire most. I respected them when I was younger, and my admiration for them has never changed.

They are humble, honest, and caring, and I can describe them only with the best words in the world.

>>CORRECT

OR>> They are kind, sincere, and thoughtful people, and I honestly cannot say enough good things about them.

When I see them getting older now, it always breaks my heart.

>>CORRECT

OR>> Seeing my parents grow older now always makes me emotional.

I am always proud to be their son. I also want to be that kind of person to my children.

>>CORRECT

OR>> I have always been proud to be their son, and I hope to become the same kind of parent for my own children someday.