homework

2012-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Wow~ Today's homework is very difficult. Yes, I have one. It's my friend Mi-Hyang. We went to the same university. She is older than me. She is like a sister to me. She always takes care of me. She buys a delicious food for me and takes me to nice place. When I went to Suwon lately, I met her and I had a good time with her. She took me for a drive and she bought barbecues for me. I said this, she is like my boyfriend. kkk. Korean think that older man should take care of a younger. And a youngman also respects them. Mihyang takes care of me and I love her. Anyway she is thanksful person to me.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss. [Name], Thank you for doing your homework once again, though you find it dificult..kkk.. By the way, maybe we can talk more about your friend/boyfriend Mi-Hyang later in our class,kkk^^Take care always my dear xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Wow~ Today\'s homework is very difficult.>>correct Yes, I have one.>>correct It\'s my friend Mi-Hyang.>>correct We went to the same university.>>correct She is older than me.>>correct She is like a sister to me.>>correct She always takes care of me.>>correct She buys a delicious food for me and takes me to nice place.>>correct..nice places When I went to Suwon lately, I met her and I had a good time with her.>>correct She took me for a drive and she bought barbecues for me.>>correct I said this, she is like my boyfriend. kkk.>>correct..(~.^) Korean think that older man should take care of a younger.>>Korea people think that older man should take care of the younger ones. And a youngman also respects them.>>And a young man also respects them. Mihyang takes care of me and I love her.>>correct Anyway she is thanksful person to me. >>Anyway, I\'m always thankful to her..:)

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