homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow~ Today's homework is very difficult.
Yes, I have one.
It's my friend Mi-Hyang.
We went to the same university.
She is older than me.
She is like a sister to me.
She always takes care of me.
She buys a delicious food for me and takes me to nice place.
When I went to Suwon lately, I met her and I had a good time with her.
She took me for a drive and she bought barbecues for me.
I said this, she is like my boyfriend. kkk.
Korean think that older man should take care of a younger.
And a youngman also respects them.
Mihyang takes care of me and I love her.
Anyway she is thanksful person to me.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss. [Name],
Thank you for doing your homework once again, though you find it dificult..kkk..
By the way, maybe we can talk more about your friend/boyfriend Mi-Hyang later in our class,kkk^^Take care always my dear
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Wow~ Today\'s homework is very difficult.>>correct
Yes, I have one.>>correct
It\'s my friend Mi-Hyang.>>correct
We went to the same university.>>correct
She is older than me.>>correct
She is like a sister to me.>>correct
She always takes care of me.>>correct
She buys a delicious food for me and takes me to nice place.>>correct..nice places
When I went to Suwon lately, I met her and I had a good time with her.>>correct
She took me for a drive and she bought barbecues for me.>>correct
I said this, she is like my boyfriend. kkk.>>correct..(~.^)
Korean think that older man should take care of a younger.>>Korea people think that older man should take care of the younger ones.
And a youngman also respects them.>>And a young man also respects them.
Mihyang takes care of me and I love her.>>correct
Anyway she is thanksful person to me.
>>Anyway, I\'m always thankful to her..:)
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