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Do adults need clear life goals, or is it okay to live without strict goals?
I think they don\'t need clear life goal, just prepare future and have shortly goal. Make clear life goal is so hard and many people don\'t have it. Almost adult have unclear goal but they prepare hard for when they get a clear goal.
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I think they don\'t need clear life goal, just prepare future and have shortly goal.
>> I think people don’t need a very clear life goal. It is enough to prepare for the future and have short-term goals.
Make clear life goal is so hard and many people don\'t have it.
>> Having a clear life goal is very hard, and many people don’t have one.
Almost adult have unclear goal but they prepare hard for when they get a clear goal.
>> Most adults have unclear goals, but they still work hard to prepare for when they find a clear direction in life.
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