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In my company’s case, strict security policies lower work efficiency. For example, we have to secure all work outputs, and whenever we send files to subcontractors, we have to report it to our boss. In addition these security files are very large, which slows down the processing time.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ho [이름]!
There will always be the pros and cons. It may be helpful for the company, but not beneficial for the workers, or the other way around.
The management should find ways to come up with a win-win resolution.
Aki~
In my company’s case, strict security policies lower work efficiency.
>>> CORRECT!
For example, we have to secure all work outputs, and whenever we send files to subcontractors, we have to report it to our boss.
>>> CORRECT!
In addition, these security files are very large, which slows down the processing time.
>>> CORRECT!
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