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My theme song would be "Nella Fantasia" because it is a grand melody and has a beautiful story.
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Hi there [이름]! Good job in our clas tonight kkkk. I will try to listen to your theme song: Nella Fantasia. I would also like to hear you sing next time! kkkk. Anyway, my theme song would be \"Secrets\" or \"White Houses\", I really like these songs. Have fun this holiday my dear and take care! Talk to you again on Thursday!
~t.Karen (.-__-)
My theme song would be \"Nella Fantasia\" because it is a grand melody and has a beautiful story.
>> My theme song would be \"Nella Fantasia\" because it has a grand melody and it has a beautiful story.
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