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You have to ask for if you can take the last seat to your friend, when you go to the theater to watch a performance.
Imagine if you can control yourself ,when you encounter a bad situation.
Learn how to swim until you get confident in deep water.
Avoid dogs when you are going for a walk.
Don\'t go in a closed room which are full of people......^^
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing this. You showed practical examples of how to overcome fears, which makes your sentences meaningful and easy to relate to. I like that you used imperative forms (“Avoid dogs…,” “Learn how to swim…”). That’s exactly the right style for giving advice!
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
You have to ask for if you can take the last seat to your friend, when you go to the theater to watch a performance.
~ Corrected: When you go to the theater to watch a performance, you have to ask your friend if you can take the last seat.
Imagine if you can control yourself ,when you encounter a bad situation.
~ Corrected: Imagine being able to control yourself when you encounter a bad situation.
Learn how to swim until you get confident in deep water.
~ Corrected: Practice swimming until you feel confident in deep water. (\"Learn how to swim\" usually refers to the initial phase of acquiring the skill.)
Avoid dogs when you are going for a walk.
~ CORRECT.
Don\'t go in a closed room which are full of people......^^
~ Corrected: Don\'t go into a crowded, enclosed room.
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