Homework

2026-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY: Nowadays many people prefer to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? we take into account brand of merchandise because of its quality. Many people think that famous brand is guaranteed a good item. These mind promotes many purchase about expensive brand such as new balance, nike, apple, and samsung. But These trust is not good. it hinders economical and technical deveolopment. I think that economy and technic are upgraded by competition. But existence of high quality brands obstract competition.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Lee! Thanks for your essay today! Your essay has a clear position: famous brands can reduce competition and may slow economic and technological progress. That\'s a good foundation because the reader can easily understand your main argument. Keep it up!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

we take into account brand of merchandise because of its quality.

>>> We consider the brand of a product because we associate it with quality.

Many people think that famous brand is guaranteed a good item.

>>> Many people believe that well-known brands guarantee good products.

These mind promotes many purchase about expensive brand such as new balance, nike, apple, and samsung.

>>> This belief encourages consumers to purchase expensive items from brands such as New Balance, Nike, Apple, and Samsung.

But These trust is not good. it hinders economical and technical deveolopment.

>>> However, this trust in famous brands is not always beneficial.

I think that economy and technic are upgraded by competition.

>>> It can hinder economic and technological development.

But existence of high quality brands obstract competition.

>>> However, the dominance of well-established brands can obstruct competition.

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