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학생이 쓴 원문
Why do adults neglect s[이름]p?
They want to do many things but they don\'t have enough time because they have to go to work. We can\'t control work time however we can control s[이름]p so many people enjoy their night and s[이름]p at the weekends
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They want to do many things but they don\'t have enough time because they have to go to work.
>> They want to do many things, but they don\'t have enough time because they have to go to work.
>> They want to do many things, but they don\'t have enough time because they have to go to work.
We can\'t control work time however we can control s[이름]p so many people enjoy their night and s[이름]p at the weekends
>> We can\'t control our working hours; however, we can control our s[이름]p schedule, so many people enjoy their nights and s[이름]p more on weekends.
>> We can\'t control our working hours; however, we can control our s[이름]p schedule, so many people enjoy their nights and s[이름]p more on weekends.
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