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The spider goes up its leg / It's very good! The leader is very improtant! / I led many people. My friend lie to me. / I lay to my friend yesterday. <The bremen town musicians> The donkey, dog, cat were very old so their owner doesn't want to rais them. And cock's master wants to eat cock so cock ran away. So doncky, dog, cat and cock was going to bremen. But on the way to bremen they see a house. That house was robber's house. In the house there was delicious food. the donkey, dog, cat and cock sing because they're happy. But two robbers thought the ghost are singing. And they ran away so donkey, dog, cat and cock eat all of delicious food. And day go to the bremen.

Hey [이름]! Thanks for dropping by. I checked your homework, please review my corrections. ^^ This is an interesting story, by the way. I found it a bit hilarious that the robbers ran away because of the animals. :D Keep up the good job! Have a great day! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ The spider goes up its leg / >> CORRECT It\'s very good! >> CORRECTThe leader is very improtant! / >> CORRECT OR >> The leader is very important. I led many people. >> CORRECTMy friend lie to me. / >> My friend lied to me. I lay to my friend yesterday.>> I lay my head on my friend\'s shoulders.<The bremen town musicians> >> CORRECTThe donkey, dog, cat were very old so their owner doesn\'t want to rais them. >> The donkey, the dog and the cat were very old so their owner didn\'t want to raise them.And cock\'s master wants to eat cock so cock ran away. >> The cock\'s master wants to eat it so it ran away.So doncky, dog, cat and cock was going to bremen.>> So the donkey, the dog, the cat and the cock went to Bremen. But on the way to bremen they see a house. >> On the way to Bremen, they saw a house.That house was robber\'s house. >> It was a robber\'s house.In the house there was delicious food. >> There was delicious food in the house.the donkey, dog, cat and cock sing because they\'re happy. >> The animals sang because they were happy.But two robbers thought the ghost are singing. >> The two robbers thought it was the ghost who was singing.And they ran away so donkey, dog, cat and cock eat all of delicious food.>> They ran away so the animals ate all the delicious food. And day go to the bremen. >> The next day they went to Bremen.