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The main purpose of the prison is to rehabilitate criminals. However, this function has been weakened, because the laws are not strict enough in Korea. Therefore, I think the primary role of the prison in Korea is to protect society from the criminals.
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Hello, Ho [이름]!
I agree with you but because of corrupt people, the system ha changed.
I agree with you but because of corrupt people, the system ha changed.
Talk to you tomorrow.
Aki~
The main purpose of the prison is to rehabilitate criminals.
>> CORRECT!
However, this function has been weakened, because the laws are not strict enough in Korea.
The main purpose of the prison is to rehabilitate criminals.
>> CORRECT!
However, this function has been weakened, because the laws are not strict enough in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
Therefore, I think the primary role of the prison in Korea is to protect society from the criminals.
>> CORRECT!
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