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2026-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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Hi, Ash I glad meet you again. but I saw that you have full schedule. It is amazing. I am going to [이름]e schedule next week. please take note. these day, I always spend busy time. but I think it it is natural work for my grow up. and I prepare a lot of project. speaking also my project . and I hope to move better company to speak English fluently. How about is my story? Do I look like new student?

강사 첨삭

Hey [이름] [이름],

I am glad to see you back. Thanks for sharing your goals.

I don\'t think you are a new student but an intermediate student who is actively practicing and improving.

You still make some grammar mistakes, but your ideas are clear and understandable.

See you in class!

T. Ash

Hi, Ash

>> Hi Ash,

I glad meet you again.

>> I’m glad to see you again.

but I saw that you have full schedule. It is amazing.

>> I saw that you have a full schedule, and I’m impressed.

I am going to [이름]e schedule next week. please take note.

>> Please take note that I am [이름]ing my schedule next week.

these day, I always spend busy time. but I think it it is natural work for my grow up.

>> These days have been so busy, but I think that it is just part of adulthood.

and I prepare a lot of project. speaking also my project .

>> I am preparing for a new project, and learning to speak English is also a part of it.

and I hope to move better company to speak English fluently.

>> I hope to move to a better company and speak English fluently.

How about is my story?

>>How is my story?

Do I look like new student?

>> Do I sound like a new student?

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