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I would support establishing a government agency to prevent school violence and other illegal behavior.
These days, many problems are occurring in schools and teachers have lost their ability to prevent them.
I think that schools should be the safest places for children.
If schools lose their ability to prevent them, the government should take action.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ho [이름]!
When I watched the drama, although we say it\'s fictional, most of the scenes were really happening in our current school situation. Yes, there is an exaggeration, but on closer inspection, it is a real-time situation that school authorities must address.
Aki~
I would support establishing a government agency to prevent school violence and other illegal behavior.
>>> CORRECT!
These days, many problems are occurring in schools, and teachers have lost their ability to prevent them.
>>> CORRECT!
I think that schools should be the safest places for children.
>>> CORRECT!
OR > I think a school should be one of the safest places for children.
If schools lose their ability to prevent them, the government should take action.
>>> CORRECT!
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