Homework
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What do you think will be the world\'s greatest problem in 20 years time?
I think that the world\'s greatest problem in 20years is weather. The weather\'s problem started already. Everywhere in the world happening a lot of disaster with weather. These days typhoon is very strong and made a lot. Somewhere is afflicted with flood, the other side is afflicted with drought. Our country didn\'t too much hot in summer before. Hightest temperature in summer was about 30-33 degrees. But nowadays is over 35degrees. Sometimes was 40degrees. We have to prepare our future right now. We have to do easy matter. We can reduce garbage, save energy, don\'t throw trash out etc. Let\'s do it now.
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Hello Eva,
I can see you\'re trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn everyday. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need. You can do it, if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^
T. Jeny
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I think that the world\'s greatest problem in 20years is weather.
>>Correct
The weather\'s problem started already.
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Everywhere in the world happening a lot of disaster with weather.
Everywhere in the world happening a lot of disaster with weather.
>>Everywhere in the world, a lot of disasters are happening because of the weather.
These days typhoon is very strong and made a lot.
These days typhoon is very strong and made a lot.
>>These days, the typhoons are a lot stronger.
Somewhere is afflicted with flood, the other side is afflicted with drought.
>>Somewhere is afflicted with flood, and the other side is afflicted with drought.
Our country didn\'t too much hot in summer before.
Our country didn\'t too much hot in summer before.
>>The summer season in my country wasn\'t too hot before.
Hightest temperature in summer was about 30-33 degrees.
>>The highest temperature in summer was about 30-33 degrees.
But nowadays is over 35degrees.
But nowadays is over 35degrees.
>>But nowadays it is over 35degrees.
Sometimes was 40degrees.
Sometimes was 40degrees.
>>Sometimes it is 40degrees.
We have to prepare our future right now.
We have to prepare our future right now.
>>Correct
We have to do easy matter.
>>We have to do simple things.
We can reduce garbage, save energy, don\'t throw trash out etc.
>> We can reduce garbage, save energy, and don\'t throw trash out etc.
Let\'s do it now.
>>Correct
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