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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
I saw the game. It was unfortunate that they lost, but they played well.
Mexico was just too strong. Although, they are not yet out of the game.
-T. Ash
If we win this game, we are able to join Round of 32.
>> If we win this game, we will be able to advance to The Round of 32.
I watching the mexico game now. but we are losing.
>> I’m watching the game right now, but we are losing.
I think Match detail is korea lose too.
>> I think Korea will lose the match.
Mexico team showed better than Korea team.
>> Mexico showed better teamwork than Korea.
We have to show Korea style match detail. but we couldn\'t show because mexico team stronged.
>> We wanted to show Korean style football, but we couldn’t because Mexico’s team is very strong.
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