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2020-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

학생이 쓴 원문

1. \"Girls can\'t be what they can\'t see...\" What can you say about this? Do you agree or disagree? I disagree with it. 2. What was your favorite to as a child? It was Lego. 3. Do you think children nowdays have a chanced to play with toys or are they more focused on computer games? I think children nowdays have a chance to play with toys.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Good work!

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow!

~Teacher Sheila



I disagree with it.
>>CORRECT

It was Lego.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Lego was my favorite toy when I was a kid.

I think children nowdays have a chance to play with toys.
>>I think children nowadays have a chance to play with toys.

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