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2026-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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What is Hangzhou famous for? What souvenirs have you bought from Hangzhou? I don\'t know. I also first time in Hangzhou.. but I saw beautiful Islands.. and I tired to do a lot of sightseeing. I don\'t bought for souvenirs from Hangzhou.. I bought china snack from airport.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름], 


Thanks for sharing your thoughts about your trip.

See you later. 


T. Ash


I don\'t know. 

>> CORRECT!


I also first time in Hangzhou.. but I saw beautiful Islands.. and I tired to do a lot of sightseeing.

>> It’s also my first time in Hangzhou, but I saw lots of beautiful islands, but it was tiring to do a lot of sightseeing. 


I don\'t bought for souvenirs from Hangzhou.. I bought china snack from airport. 

>> I didn’t buy any souvenirs from Hangzhou; I bought a Chinese snack from the airport instead.


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