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2012-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) She is not going to walk to the stadium. (not/to walk) 2) Are you going to fly to London? (to fly) 3) John is going to eat anything. (not/to eat) 4) Is she going to stay at a campsite? (to stay) 5) What do you going to do tomorrow? (to do) I went to my friend's house for a housewarming. She got married last April. She invited us on 5th of June. We stayed for 2 days at her house. We chatted all night even without drinking a beer. We talked about each other's life. Our talking was not ended. When I went to the bed, it was 5 am. And I waked up 8 am. The host already got up and prepared our breakfast. She is very diligent. After having it, we went to the temple near her house just for a walking. We walked with taking a picture. After we had good time for about 1 hour there, we had to go home. Time's up for bus and train. I was glad to meet my friends. but I'm very tired now. My strength is rusty.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], Thank you so much for dropping by to make your composition..:) Im glad to hear that you had a great time with your friends..:) Anyway, were gonna talk more about this later in our class Miss. [Name]..^^ Take care always.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) She is not going to walk to the stadium. (not/to walk) >>correct2) Are you going to fly to London? (to fly) >>correct3) John is going to eat anything. (not/to eat) >>correct4) Is she going to stay at a campsite? (to stay) >>correct5) What do you going to do tomorrow? (to do)>>correctI went to my friend\'s house for a housewarming. >>correctShe got married last April. >>correctShe invited us on 5th of June. >>She invited us on the 5th of June.We stayed for 2 days at her house. >>correctWe chatted all night even without drinking a beer. >>correct >>We had a chat all ight even without drinking a beer.We talked about each other\'s life. >>correctOur talking was not ended. >>Our conversation was not yet over.When I went to the bed, it was 5 am. >>correct >>I went to bed at 5 am.And I waked up 8 am. >>I woke up at 8 am.The host already got up and prepared our breakfast. >>correctShe is very diligent. >>correctAfter having it, we went to the temple near her house just for a walking. >>After our breakfast we went to the temple near the house to walk.We walked with taking a picture. >>We were taking some pictures while walking.After we had good time for about 1 hour there, we had to go home. >>After one hour of having a good time, we needed to go home.Time\'s up for bus and train. >>Time\'s up for riding the bus and train.I was glad to meet my friends. but I\'m very tired now. >>correctMy strength is rusty >>correct >>I feel so exhausted..

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