homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) She is not going to walk to the stadium. (not/to walk)
2) Are you going to fly to London? (to fly)
3) John is going to eat anything. (not/to eat)
4) Is she going to stay at a campsite? (to stay)
5) What do you going to do tomorrow? (to do)
I went to my friend's house for a housewarming.
She got married last April.
She invited us on 5th of June.
We stayed for 2 days at her house.
We chatted all night even without drinking a beer.
We talked about each other's life.
Our talking was not ended.
When I went to the bed, it was 5 am.
And I waked up 8 am.
The host already got up and prepared our breakfast.
She is very diligent.
After having it, we went to the temple near her house just for a walking.
We walked with taking a picture.
After we had good time for about 1 hour there, we had to go home.
Time's up for bus and train.
I was glad to meet my friends. but I'm very tired now.
My strength is rusty.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name],
Thank you so much for dropping by to make your composition..:)
Im glad to hear that you had a great time with your friends..:)
Anyway, were gonna talk more about this later in our class Miss. [Name]..^^
Take care always..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
1) She is not going to walk to the stadium. (not/to walk)
>>correct2) Are you going to fly to London? (to fly)
>>correct3) John is going to eat anything. (not/to eat)
>>correct4) Is she going to stay at a campsite? (to stay)
>>correct5) What do you going to do tomorrow? (to do)>>correctI went to my friend\'s house for a housewarming.
>>correctShe got married last April.
>>correctShe invited us on 5th of June.
>>She invited us on the 5th of June.We stayed for 2 days at her house.
>>correctWe chatted all night even without drinking a beer.
>>correct
>>We had a chat all ight even without drinking a beer.We talked about each other\'s life.
>>correctOur talking was not ended.
>>Our conversation was not yet over.When I went to the bed, it was 5 am.
>>correct
>>I went to bed at 5 am.And I waked up 8 am.
>>I woke up at 8 am.The host already got up and prepared our breakfast.
>>correctShe is very diligent.
>>correctAfter having it, we went to the temple near her house just for a walking.
>>After our breakfast we went to the temple near the house to walk.We walked with taking a picture.
>>We were taking some pictures while walking.After we had good time for about 1 hour there, we had to go home.
>>After one hour of having a good time, we needed to go home.Time\'s up for bus and train.
>>Time\'s up for riding the bus and train.I was glad to meet my friends. but I\'m very tired now.
>>correctMy strength is rusty
>>correct
>>I feel so exhausted..
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