homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, I applied here and my name is Ji[이름] [이름], I’m really confident for that work, and when I have to work there for the first time, when will it be?
Of course. I’m able to start my work as soon as next week. Then what is my specific assigned task?
Oh, actually I can perform that kinds of job well. Also I’m curious about where I’ll be working.
That’s great! There is very close to my house, and I’m confident I [이름]’t be late.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ji[이름]!
Thank you for submitting your answer from last week\'s third set of questions in OPIc. The goal of this drill is to test your ability to communicate naturally according to the response of another speaker.
As you can see below, there are only a few grammar suggestions underlined and some of them are the pluralization of nouns when mentioned in general, the correct pronoun for plural nouns as well as for place, and the careful arrangements and choices of words for your introduction. Make it clear and concise.
Overall, you get the bird\'s eye view of the task. Well done!
See you later in class.
-T. Donna~
>>> Correct!
That’s great! There is very close to my house, and I’m confident I [이름]’t be late.
Or: Hello, I applied here and my name is Ji[이름] [이름], I’m really confident and excited to know/ find out when can I begin/ start?
Of course. I’m able to start my work as soon as next week. Then what is my specific assigned task?
Of course. I’m able to start my work as soon as next week. Then what is my specific assigned task?
>>> Of course. I’m able to start my work as soon as next week. Then what are my specific assigned tasks?
Oh, actually I can perform that kinds of job well. Also I’m curious about where I’ll be working.
Oh, actually I can perform that kinds of job well. Also I’m curious about where I’ll be working.
>>> Oh, actually I can perform those kinds of job well. Also, I’m curious about where I’ll be working.
That’s great! There is very close to my house, and I’m confident I [이름]’t be late.
>>> That’s great! That is very close to my house, and I’m confident I [이름]’t be late.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.