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Based on my experience, I am looking for an annual salary in the range of XX to XX million Korean won. However, I\'m open to discussing the final offer depending on the overall compensation and opportunities for growth.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name][이름]! This is a very strong and professional way to express your salary expectations. You sound confident, flexible, and reasonable, which is exactly what interviewers look for. I also like that you included both your expected range and your openness to discussion; it shows good communication and maturity.
~T. Jenna
Based on my experience, I am looking for an annual salary in the range of XX to XX million Korean won.
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However, I\'m open to discussing the final offer depending on the overall compensation and opportunities for growth.
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Based on my experience, I am looking for an annual salary in the range of XX to XX million Korean won. However, I am flexible and open to discussion depending on the overall compensation package and growth opportunities. I am more focused on finding a role where I can contribute effectively and continue developing my skills. I believe we can agree on a fair and mutually beneficial offer.
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