homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I work in two different places in the academy and in Lululemon.
When I work in academy, they provide me a meal. Also I can choose the menu so that’s really big benefit for me. I usually have lunch in the vacant classroom alone. It sounds like little lonely, but It’s not that bad, because I can eat at my own pace.
Similar with in academy, I eat lunch Lululemon alone too. You know, I’m a part-timer, so only 30 minutes is allowed. It’s not that long time to have a leisurely meal time, so I like to eat protein-bar or protein-shake which I can eat fast.
Where I work is different, but eating alone at lunch time is quite same.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ji[이름]!
This answer is at an average length and can easily pass the time limit set for the OPIc speaking test Part II.
As you can see, most of the grammar suggestions are about the use of \"a\" for non-specific nouns or ideas, and the use of \"the\" which is for specific nouns referred to in your sentences. This is a common grammar challenge for most East Asian English language learners. Thus, hone your skill by memorizing when to use and when not to use these two determiners.
Overall, the organization and vocabulary scores high. Well done!
See you in class.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Or: I work in two different places; in the academy and in Lululemon.
When I work in academy, they provide me a meal. Also I can choose the menu so that’s really big benefit for me. I usually have lunch in the vacant classroom alone. It sounds like little lonely, but It’s not that bad, because I can eat at my own pace.
When I work in academy, they provide me a meal. Also I can choose the menu so that’s really big benefit for me. I usually have lunch in the vacant classroom alone. It sounds like little lonely, but It’s not that bad, because I can eat at my own pace.
>> When I work in the academy, they provide me a meal. Also, I can choose the menu so that’s really a big benefit for me. I usually have lunch in a vacant classroom alone. It sounds like a little lonely, but It’s not that bad, because I can eat at my own pace.
Similar with in academy, I eat lunch Lululemon alone too. You know, I’m a part-timer, so only 30 minutes is allowed. It’s not that long time to have a leisurely meal time, so I like to eat protein-bar or protein-shake which I can eat fast.
Similar with in academy, I eat lunch Lululemon alone too. You know, I’m a part-timer, so only 30 minutes is allowed. It’s not that long time to have a leisurely meal time, so I like to eat protein-bar or protein-shake which I can eat fast.
>> Similar within the academy, I eat lunch at Lululemon alone too. You know, I’m a part-timer, so only 30 minutes is allowed. It’s not that long time to have a leisurely meal time, so I like to eat protein-bar or protein-shake which I can eat fast.
Where I work is different, but eating alone at lunch time is quite same.
Where I work is different, but eating alone at lunch time is quite same.
>> Where I work is different, but eating alone at lunch time is quite the same.
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