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학생이 쓴 원문
I usually go to the park near by my house and walk around.
It’s one of my favorite ways to relax after a busy day.
However, I had a special experience last weekend.
I visited Seocheon Natural Recreation Forest about 2pm, the park was very cool and shady because of all the tall trees.
Seocheon is located in Chungcheong-do, and it’s close to my grandparent’s house.
There was a various kinds of exercise equipment, such as bike and horizontal bars.
So we enjoyed this equipment together and walked along the path.
Also, in front of the park there was [이름]derful ocean view.
It was combination of a forest and the sea, which made the place feel very unique.
It was a memorable experience because I could enjoy nature and spend quality time with my family.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ji[이름]!
I am glad that you sent two answers from yesterday. I am not certain you could send the answer today due to limited chances for submission. Nevertheless, below are very few grammar suggestions.
The use of \"the\' is for specific nouns and those that you have already mentioned in your discussion. If a noun is not specific and unknown, we use \"a\".
The details you mentioned are specific, the vocabulary can be improved but are appropriate, and your transition was smooth. Excellent job!
See you next week.
-T. Donna~
It’s one of my favorite ways to relax after a busy day.
However, I had a special experience last weekend.
I visited Seocheon Natural Recreation Forest about 2pm, the park was very cool and shady because of all the tall trees.
>> I usually go to the park nearby my house and walk around.
It’s one of my favorite ways to relax after a busy day.However, I had a special experience last weekend.
I visited Seocheon Natural Recreation Forest about 2pm, the park was very cool and shady because of all the tall trees.
Seocheon is located in Chungcheong-do, and it’s close to my grandparent’s house.
There was a various kinds of exercise equipment, such as bike and horizontal bars.
So we enjoyed this equipment together and walked along the path.
Also, in front of the park there was [이름]derful ocean view.
>> Seocheon is located in Chungcheong-do, and it’s close to my grandparent’s house.
There were various kinds of exercise equipment, such as bike and horizontal bars.So we enjoyed this equipment together and walked along the path.
Also, in front of the park there was a [이름]derful ocean view.
It was combination of a forest and the sea, which made the place feel very unique.
It was a memorable experience because I could enjoy nature and spend quality time with my family.
>> It was a combination of the forest and the sea, which made the place feel very unique.
It was a memorable experience because I could enjoy nature and spend quality time with my family.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.