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yes We should invest recharge energy.
we should prepare because resource could deplete.
we have high technology for recharge energy.
I think I want install solar panel at home.
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-T. Ash
yes We should invest recharge energy.
>> Yes, we should invest in renewable energy.
we should prepare because resource could deplete.
>> We should prepare because resources can be depleted.
we have high technology for recharge energy.
>> We have good technology to use renewable energy.
I think I want install solar panel at home.
>> I think I want to install solar panels at home.
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