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2026-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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What is a recent milestone your child reached that completely surprised you? My son is slowly. I want my son to speak korean. I feel amazing my son tell me father, Mom. and My son says I want to buy toy and juice. I feel my son grow up with me these day. I want to do my son is want everythings

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름], 


Thanks for sharing your thoughts here. 

See you! 


T. Ash



My son is slowly. 

>> My son is slowly progressing. 


I want my son to speak korean. 

>>I want my son to start speaking. 


I feel amazing my son tell me father, Mom.

>> I am amazed to hear him say \"dad\' or \'mom\". 


and My son says I want to buy toy and juice. 

>> My son always wants me to buy juice and toys. 


I feel my son grow up with me these day.

>> I feel like my son has grown up a lot these days. 


I want to do my son is want everythings

>> I want to do everything with my son.


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