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2026-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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If you could recommend one toy to new parents, what would it be and why? I want to recommend big car. if new parents have a boy, I recommend big car. because I think I have to save money. so I think I request to buy big car with my parents and friends. if new parents have a girl, I recommend kitchen toy. Most of children likes it. my son also like it, too. When girl friends of my son came my home. they are playing cooking play.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름], 


I think that is a very good recommendation. 

See you!


T. Ash


I want to recommend big car. 

>> I want to recommend a big toy car. 


if new parents have a boy, I recommend big car. because I think I have to save money. 

>> If a new parent has a baby boy, I will advise them to buy a big toy car because they will save money in the long run.


so I think I request to buy big car with my parents and friends.

>> Instead of buying many small toys, I would ask my parents and friends to buy one big toy car as a gift. 


 if new parents have a girl, I recommend kitchen toy. 

>> But if they have a baby girl, I recommend that they buy a kitchen toy set.  


Most of children likes it. my son also like it, too.

>> Most children like it and my son likes it too. 


When girl friends of my son came my home. they are playing cooking play. 

>> When some of my son’s friends come to visit, they like to play with the kitchen toy set. 


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