homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually listen to music when I use a public transportation.
But, you know, there’s a lot of noise around me.
So listening to exciting music actually makes me feel nervous and on edge.
That’s why I prefer songs that have a good sense of rhythm, but the atmosphere of the song itself is calm.
Among those songs, I really like listening to Black Skirts song.
He is famous Korean indie musician. His real name is Jo Hyu-il, but he also goes by “Holiday.”
He is a singer-songwriter whose lyrics are loved for being both intuitive and romantic.
Today, on the way to the subway station, I’m planning to listen his song “Love is all.”
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ji[이름]!
This answer is complete with all the elements of distinctiveness, adequate examples, and a very clear exposition.
I appreciate your inclusion of the idiom \"on edge\". It is a very good one.
Since it is in written form, there are only a few grammar suggestions such as the correct placement of comma, and some additional use of \"the\" and \"to\" for \"listen to\". Nonetheless, you are on your way to acing your speaking test come September. I am proud of you!
See you.
-T. Donna~
But, you know, there’s a lot of noise around me.
So listening to exciting music actually makes me feel nervous and on edge.
That’s why I prefer songs that have a good sense of rhythm, but the atmosphere of the song itself is calm.
>> I usually listen to music when I use a public transportation.
But you know, there’s a lot of noise around me.
So listening to exciting music actually makes me feel nervous and on edge.
That’s why I prefer songs that have a good sense of rhythm, but the atmosphere of the song itself is calm.
But you know, there’s a lot of noise around me.
So listening to exciting music actually makes me feel nervous and on edge.
That’s why I prefer songs that have a good sense of rhythm, but the atmosphere of the song itself is calm.
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
Among those songs, I really like listening to Black Skirts song.
He is famous Korean indie musician. His real name is Jo Hyu-il, but he also goes by “Holiday.”
He is a singer-songwriter whose lyrics are loved for being both intuitive and romantic.
Among those songs, I really like listening to Black Skirts song.
He is famous Korean indie musician. His real name is Jo Hyu-il, but he also goes by “Holiday.”
He is a singer-songwriter whose lyrics are loved for being both intuitive and romantic.
>> Among those songs, I really like listening to The Black Skirts songs.
He is famous Korean indie musician. His real name is Jo Hyu-il, but he also goes by “Holiday.”
He is a singer-songwriter whose lyrics are loved for being both intuitive and romantic.
He is famous Korean indie musician. His real name is Jo Hyu-il, but he also goes by “Holiday.”
He is a singer-songwriter whose lyrics are loved for being both intuitive and romantic.
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
Today, on the way to the subway station, I’m planning to listen his song “Love is all.”
Today, on the way to the subway station, I’m planning to listen his song “Love is all.”
>> Today, on the way to the subway station, I’m planning to listen to his song “Love is all.”
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