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2026-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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I want to work broadcast. when I studied at university. I study department of Information and Communication Engineer. but I don\' want this department. so after I went army, I asked my father. I want to [이름]e department and university. but My father says No, you can study department right now. you are be a good Information communication engineer.

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[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.

See you!

T. Ash

I want to work broadcast. when I studied at university.

>> I wanted to work in broadcasting when I was at the university.

I study department of Information and Communication Engineer.

>> I studied Information and Communication Engineering instead.

but I don\' want this department. so after I went army, I asked my father. I want to [이름]e department and university.

>> I don’t want to study Engineering, so after co[이름]g back from the army, I asked my dad if I could [이름]e my major and university.

but My father says No, you can study department right now. you are be a good Information communication engineer.

>> However, my dad didn’t allow me, and he said that this major is a good fit for me.

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