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2026-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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Hey Ji[이름], I heard you\'re going on a business trip soon, right? I just have a few questions before you leave. So, how long are you gonna be away for? I want to know if there\'s anything urgent I should take care of while you\'re out. Oh, I see. Then also are you gonna be reachable by email or phone during the trip? Just in case something comes up here at the office. Okay. I\'ll keep that in mind. Oh, and one more thing. Is there anything you want me to prepare before you leave? Like documents or meeting notes or anything. Okay I\'ll take care of documents. Anyway, have a safe trip, and call me if there\'s anything you need while you\'re out.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ji[이름]! 

This is exactly how this conversation needs to flow! You imagined the situation clearly and asked relevant questions about the work.

In truth, we cannot ask other things beyond work to our boss because some of them may be none of our business. Nevertheless, offering help and asking about unfinished tasks are safe and logical. Thus, excellent job!

There are just a few suggestions in grammar you need to recall. Please read and understand them well below. 

See you in class soon.

-T. Donna~

Hey Ji[이름], I heard you\'re going on a business trip soon, right?

I just have a few questions before you leave.
So, how long are you gonna be away for?
I want to know if there\'s anything urgent I should take care of while you\'re out.
>> Hey Ji[이름], I heard you\'re going on a business trip soon. Is that right?
I just have a few questions before you leave. 
So, how long are you gonna/ going to be away?
I want to know if there\'s anything urgent I should take care of while you\'re out.


Oh, I see.
Then also are you gonna be reachable by email or phone during the trip?
Just in case something comes up here at the office.
>> Oh, I see.
Then also are you gonna/ going to be reachable by email or phone during the trip?
Just in case something comes up here at the office.


Okay. I\'ll keep that in mind.
Oh, and one more thing.
Is there anything you want me to prepare before you leave?
Like documents or meeting notes or anything.
>> Okay. I\'ll keep that in mind.
Oh, and one more thing.
Is there anything you want me to prepare before you leave?
Like documents or meeting notes or anything?


Okay I\'ll take care of documents.
Anyway, have a safe trip, and call me if there\'s anything you need while you\'re out.
>> Okay I\'ll take care of the documents.
Anyway, have a safe trip, and call me if there\'s anything you need while you\'re out. 

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