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2026-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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I want to get a BMW car. and someone want to have a foriegn car. but I think I am satified with Genesis car. because If I get some money, we can buy car. I challenge to buy genesis car. This is premium brand in korea. and safety.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름], 

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here. 

See you later. 

-T. Ash


I want to get a BMW car. and someone want to have a foriegn car.

>> I want to get a BMW car like others. 


but I think I am satified with Genesis car.

>>However, I think I am already satisfied with the Genesis. 


because If I get some money, we can buy car.

>> If I have some money, I will buy a new car. 


I challenge to buy genesis car. 

>> My goal is to buy a Genesis car. 


This is premium brand in korea. and safety. 

>> This is a premium brand in Korea, and it’s also safe.


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