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My favorite park is the Nodeul Island, actually it’s near my university so I go there after school, either with friends or by myself.
When I go alone, it’s the perfect time for jogging. It’s small but circular, so it’s actually the best spot to run. I don’t have to worry about getting lost or turning around. After running, I love grabbing a cold beverage, which easy to find at the convenience store right there. That moment makes me feel so refreshed.
When I go with my friends, though, it’s a different vibe. We bring a picnic mat and order whatever food that we’re craving that day such as pizza, chicken or takpokki. Honestly, the [이름]derful view and just chatting with each other make the food taste even better.
But actually, Nodeul Island is currently preparing for a renewal. It’s supposed to be finished next year, so I’m really looking forward to going back and either running or having another great picnic day there.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ji[이름]!
This is complete with all the details that a speaking test needs to score very high. To score even better, use higher level vocabularies as: [이름]derful-breathtaking; whatever food-available food; refreshed- quenched thirst, etc.
I am sure that you can do this on your next speaking answer.
You did a marvelous job! Carry on.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
When I go alone, it’s the perfect time for jogging. It’s small but circular, so it’s actually the best spot to run. I don’t have to worry about getting lost or turning around. After running, I love grabbing a cold beverage, which easy to find at the convenience store right there. That moment makes me feel so refreshed.
When I go alone, it’s the perfect time for jogging. It’s small but circular, so it’s actually the best spot to run. I don’t have to worry about getting lost or turning around. After running, I love grabbing a cold beverage, which easy to find at the convenience store right there. That moment makes me feel so refreshed.
>> When I go alone, it’s the perfect time for jogging. It’s small but circular, so it’s actually the best spot to run. I don’t have to worry about getting lost or turning around. After running, I love grabbing a cold beverage, which is easy to find at the convenience store right there. That moment makes me feel so refreshed.
When I go with my friends, though, it’s a different vibe. We bring a picnic mat and order whatever food that we’re craving that day such as pizza, chicken or takpokki. Honestly, the [이름]derful view and just chatting with each other make the food taste even better.
When I go with my friends, though, it’s a different vibe. We bring a picnic mat and order whatever food that we’re craving that day such as pizza, chicken or takpokki. Honestly, the [이름]derful view and just chatting with each other make the food taste even better.
>> When I go with my friends though, it’s a different vibe. We bring a picnic mat and order whatever food that we’re craving for that day such as pizza, chicken or takpokki. Honestly, the [이름]derful view and just chatting with each other make the food taste even better.
But actually, Nodeul Island is currently preparing for a renewal. It’s supposed to be finished next year, so I’m really looking forward to going back and either running or having another great picnic day there.
But actually, Nodeul Island is currently preparing for a renewal. It’s supposed to be finished next year, so I’m really looking forward to going back and either running or having another great picnic day there.
>> But actually, Nodeul Island is currently preparing for a new image/ fresh identity/ rebranding. It’s supposed to be finished next year, so I’m really looking forward to going back and either running or having another great picnic day there.
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