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I think international tourism is more beneficial. However there are some problems.I think there are more benefit. And
The government should solve those problems.
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I think international tourism is more beneficial.
>> CORRECT~!^^
However there are some problems.
>> CORRECT~!^^
I think there are more benefit. AndThe government should solve those problems.
>>> I believe the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, and the government should work to address these issues.
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