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When is the most popular time for summer vacations in Korea?
Do most employees in Korea take summer vacations?
yes we can take rest summer vacation for our family.
most employees has take summer vacation. we can go to abroad and to domestic region.
we plan summer vacation in July and Aug for exhausted our. This is the middle of the year.
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yes we can take rest summer vacation for our family.
>> Yes, we can take a summer vacation for our family.
most employees has take summer vacation.
>> Most employees take a summer vacation.
we can go to abroad and to domestic region.
>> We can travel both locally and internationally. .
we plan summer vacation in July and Aug for exhausted our.
>> We plan a summer vacation around July and August.
This is the middle of the year.
>> Usually in the middle of the year.
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