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학생이 쓴 원문
Oh a beauty salon, that sounds interesting. I don’t think I go there often. I usually go to a hair salon once every four months. I think long, straight hair suits me well, so I don’t change my style much. I just get a hair cut to keep that “clean girl” look. A beauty salon where my favorite one is located near Hapjeong station. It’s actually pretty expensive price like only hair cut costs around 40,000 [이름]. But, the stylist really understands what I want, so I think it’s worth it. There’s also a salon assistant who washes my hair, and it feels incredibly refreshing when she does it. Next month is actually when I’m due for a haircut, so I’m planning to go there again.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ji[이름]!
This answer is highly imaginative and has all the complete elements of a natural and smooth-flowing conversation.
Thank you for taking the time think of the best vocabulary words and idioms to include in your answers. I truly appreciate your hard work. Well done
See you on the next composition.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
Or: Oh a beauty salon, that sounds interesting!
I just get a hair cut to keep that “clean girl” look. A beauty salon where my favorite one is located near Hapjeong station. It’s actually pretty expensive price like only hair cut costs around 40,000 [이름]. But, the stylist really understands what I want, so I think it’s worth it.
>> I just get a hair cut to keep that “clean girl” look. My favorite hair salon is located near Hapjeong station. It’s actually pretty expensive. The price of a haircut costs around 40,000 [이름]. But, the stylist really understands what I want, so I think it’s worth it.
There’s also a salon assistant who washes my hair, and it feels incredibly refreshing when she does it. Next month is actually when I’m due for a haircut, so I’m planning to go there again.
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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