Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that it is trash problem. We are making too much trash now. Our earth is limited, so we don\'t have place to throw away trash any more. I heard that there is big trash island on the pacific. This trash island biger than Korea. When I throw away trash, it flow down stream, next river and go to sea. Maybe it will come back to me as a disease. I think that we have to made way to sloved this problem. This is the most serious problem in the world.
강사 첨삭
Hello Eva,
Thank you for you homework, I hope this could really help you increase your skills in English.
You need to remember to do more things that you are good and do less with the things you aren\'t good at.
Have a wonderful day!!!!
T. Jeny
>>I think that it is the trash problem.
We are making too much trash now.
We are making too much trash now.
>>correct
Our earth is limited, so we don\'t have place to throw away trash any more.
Our earth is limited, so we don\'t have place to throw away trash any more.
>>Our earth is limited, so we don\'t have a place to throw away trash anymore.
I heard that there is big trash island on the pacific.
>>I heard that there is a big trash island in the Pacific.
This trash island biger than Korea.
>>This trash island is bigger than Korea.
When I throw away trash, it flow down stream, next river and go to sea.
>>When I throw away trash, it flows down to the stream, then to the river and goes to the sea.
Maybe it will come back to me as a disease.
>>correct
I think that we have to made way to solved this problem.
>> I think we have to make a way to solve this problem.
This is the most serious problem in the world.
>>correct
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