homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Do you think children should be allowed to choose the subjects they want to learn in school? Why? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: Yes. Because, It gave many freedom. And It gave to can tell what subjects I like it. So our school gives to find time what subjects is good to me in the school.
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Yes. Because, It gave many freedom.
>> Yes, I think children should be allowed to choose the subjects they want to learn because it gives them freedom.
And It gave to can tell what subjects I like it.
>> I can also choose the subjects I like.
So our school gives to find time what subjects is good to me in the school.
>> Our school can help us figure out what subjects we are good at.
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