homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Wow [이름]!!! You really surprised and most definitely impressed me with your answer. Your sentence construction is well made. I would love to read more stories and compositions from you! Good job, you really made me proud on this one. I hope that you will muster up the courage to do it someday (I mean, using the horizontal bar ~.~ ). It\'s better to do everything that you want to do and face the fear rather than have nothing but regrets at the end of it all. (^____^) Talk to you later! (\'c\',)
***Never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game***
~t.Karen (.-____-)
I am afraid of doing excercise on a horizontal bar but would love to do so because it is fearful but interesting to clime a horizontal bar.
>> ** Be careful of your spelling when typing out some words: [EXERCISE] and [CLIMB].
>> I am afraid of doing exercise on a horizontal bar but would love to do so because it is fearful but interesting to climb a horizontal bar.
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I am afraid of exercising on a horizontal bar but would love to do so because it is fearful but interesting to climb a horizontal bar.
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