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2012-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, teacher ^^ 1. Lookism It's too much in Korea. Don't judge other by appearance. 2. There are no two ways about it I study English because there are no two ways about it. (Upgrade me(?))

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. Of course I will help you improve. ;) Just don\'t give up okay? Here are some corrections, please review them. CIAO!
~Teacher Marie~
Good afternoon, teacher ^^
>> CORRECT
1. Lookism
It\'s too much in Korea. Don\'t judge other by appearance.
>> There is too much lookism in Korea. Don\'t judge others by their appearance.
2. There are no two ways about it
I study English because there are no two ways about it. 
>> CORRECT 
(Upgrade me(?))
>> Help me improve.

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