homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) Is she taking photos? (to take)
2) Are they watching a DVD? (to watch)
3) Is Patrick answering the phone? (to answer)
4) Are you eating this tub of ice cream? (to eat)
5) Is Rebecca reading comics? (to read)
I went to Seoul to meet my friend Nuri yesterday.
She worked with me when I worked in Daegu.
Now she lives in Seoul.
We sometimes keep in touch.
A few days ago, she called me to meet this Sunday.
She wanted to go with me to confess to priest.
I was willing to go with her on Sunday.
We went to the Myung-Dong Catheral.
Myung-Dong Cathedral is surrounded by shopping mall.
We attended a mass and shortly confessed and directly went on a shopping.
We walked for over 3 hours that day.
I finally cheaply bought sandlals and black one-piece.
When I came back home and I saw my shoes, I found its holes.
I very much walked all day, it was worn through.
I thought it was good to buy new one.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], happy Monday!I think you were busy today coz I was actually waiting for your composition..kkkk..
Its great to know that you had a great weekend with your friend..:)
Maybe we can talk more about that during our class..^^
Take care always my dear..
xoxoTeacher Cam
1) Is she taking photos? (to take)
>>correct2) Are they watching a DVD? (to watch) >>correct3) Is Patrick answering the phone? (to answer)
>>correct4) Are you eating this tub of ice cream? (to eat)
>>correct5) Is Rebecca reading comics? (to read)>>correctI went to Seoul to meet my friend Nuri yesterday.
>>correctShe worked with me when I worked in Daegu.
>>correctNow she lives in Seoul.
>>correctWe sometimes keep in touch.
>>correctA few days ago, she called me to meet this Sunday.
>>correctShe wanted to go with me to confess to priest.
>>She wanted to go with me to have a confessions.I was willing to go with her on Sunday.
>>correctWe went to the Myung-Dong Catheral.
>>correctMyung-Dong Cathedral is surrounded by shopping mall.
>>correctWe attended a mass and shortly confessed and directly went on a shopping.
>>correctWe walked for over 3 hours that day.
>>correctI finally cheaply bought sandlals and black one-piece.
>>I finally bought a cheap sandals and a black one piece.When I came back home and I saw my shoes, I found its holes.
>>correctI very much walked all day, it was worn through.
>>correctI thought it was good to buy new one.
>>correct
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