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2012-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) Is she taking photos? (to take) 2) Are they watching a DVD? (to watch) 3) Is Patrick answering the phone? (to answer) 4) Are you eating this tub of ice cream? (to eat) 5) Is Rebecca reading comics? (to read) I went to Seoul to meet my friend Nuri yesterday. She worked with me when I worked in Daegu. Now she lives in Seoul. We sometimes keep in touch. A few days ago, she called me to meet this Sunday. She wanted to go with me to confess to priest. I was willing to go with her on Sunday. We went to the Myung-Dong Catheral. Myung-Dong Cathedral is surrounded by shopping mall. We attended a mass and shortly confessed and directly went on a shopping. We walked for over 3 hours that day. I finally cheaply bought sandlals and black one-piece. When I came back home and I saw my shoes, I found its holes. I very much walked all day, it was worn through. I thought it was good to buy new one.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], happy Monday!I think you were busy today coz I was actually waiting for your composition..kkkk.. Its great to know that you had a great weekend with your friend..:) Maybe we can talk more about that during our class..^^ Take care always my dear.. xoxoTeacher Cam 1) Is she taking photos? (to take) >>correct2) Are they watching a DVD? (to watch) >>correct3) Is Patrick answering the phone? (to answer) >>correct4) Are you eating this tub of ice cream? (to eat) >>correct5) Is Rebecca reading comics? (to read)>>correctI went to Seoul to meet my friend Nuri yesterday. >>correctShe worked with me when I worked in Daegu. >>correctNow she lives in Seoul. >>correctWe sometimes keep in touch. >>correctA few days ago, she called me to meet this Sunday. >>correctShe wanted to go with me to confess to priest. >>She wanted to go with me to have a confessions.I was willing to go with her on Sunday. >>correctWe went to the Myung-Dong Catheral. >>correctMyung-Dong Cathedral is surrounded by shopping mall. >>correctWe attended a mass and shortly confessed and directly went on a shopping. >>correctWe walked for over 3 hours that day. >>correctI finally cheaply bought sandlals and black one-piece. >>I finally bought a cheap sandals and a black one piece.When I came back home and I saw my shoes, I found its holes. >>correctI very much walked all day, it was worn through. >>correctI thought it was good to buy new one. >>correct

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